Catching the signal from one of her friends, Angela brushed her skirt, took a deep breath and walked towards where he was sitting. After the others she was with leave and stays there with one guy. There she goes all brave and mighty then she grabs her skirt and sits very lady like with a graceful pose right in front of him. For a moment there is just silence then they both try to break it with just one word " hey. " Those friends who had "left" were really just a block away just watching them because it was a setup for them to talk , it may had been mean but nice at the same time.
In there minds i think that all can go through was them saying "this was a
piece of cake" even though it is so cliché. Now at these very moments Angela and Juan were socializing and getting to know each other very well but then out of now where Juan just says " your eyes are like the seven seas glistening with the warm sunsets of the beaches."
When Angela had heard this she just got speechless and started to get tears in her eyes with a lot of emotion that is just when they had realized the hidden love between them that they never got to express before until that moment. This may as well is the moment she will say " you are the light of my life ." and they both stared into each other eyes amorously and gave each other a hug like if it the last one in the universe.
awww i THiNK THis WRiTiNG HAS A VERy dETAiLEd dESCRiPTiON OF TWO LOVE biRdS, ANd yOU USEd VERy MAGICAL WORdS TO dESCRiBE THE MOMENT ALSO.[[yEA WE KiNdA WROTE AbOUT THE SAME TOO:)]]
ReplyDeleteAws. :D That piece had very good detail and great use of literary devices. It's real cool, great job!!
ReplyDeleteomg ii love it!! =] i like how you said that angela and juan where getting to know eachother sooo romantic ahahahaha. I also like how you put " a piece of cake " like in our poster. and i love the pictures very very nice.
ReplyDeletei really like this. it was very detailed :)
ReplyDelete&& i agree with Karina. this was cute :)